Q: When I write dialogue, must I make all my characters
speak in contractions? My critique circle members say all
dialogue should use contractions. Aren’t we supposed to
give each character a unique voice? If so, can’t one of my
characters be so prim and proper that she doesn’t speak in
contractions?
A: The members of your critique group have the right idea—
natural dialogue does usually rely on contractions, but
creative writing gives a writer a great deal of leeway. You
know your characters best, and if one doesn’t use
contractions, so be it. Don’t let anyone–not even members
of your critique circle–cram a singular opinion down your
throat. Listen to the suggestions of others, thank them,
and then do whatever you want. If, however, an acquisitions
editor asks you to change something to make your piece more
marketable, that’s the time to listen and follow.
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